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Offline reytm2

My first added
« on: August 12, 2011, 03:46:26 PM »
Hello,

I interezado collaborate with the pak96.comic.  Last night I did a vehicle.

I hope comments ...

Greetings.



http://simutrans.galeon.com/RomanTruck.zip


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Offline An_dz

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Re: My first added
« Reply #1 on: August 12, 2011, 08:24:06 PM »
It look very nice, but you need to make some tweaks on shadowing:
reduce the color on the trailer top, it's too dark;
darker the truck cabin top and front (the whole cabin is the same color).

You could thing about use player colors. Here's a link about it on the wiki. If it's in german on the right top corner you can choose English and Portuguese

I can't download the file. The site is down. So I can't say much about it on game play.

PS.:And on next releases or projects you start, post on Pak96.comic Add-ons and Graphics.
« Last Edit: August 12, 2011, 08:36:48 PM by An_dz »

Offline reytm2

Re: My first added
« Reply #2 on: August 14, 2011, 01:31:01 PM »
An_dz:

Thanks for the tips. I consider these details in future editions that are already on the desk. and why not improve this too.

Reytm2

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Offline sonik

Re: My first added
« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2012, 11:36:35 PM »
I suggest using this thread to all those who create objects for pak96 first time. Perhaps here we get objective criticism from the pros. If this topic is wrong for this - correct me, please. My first job will be preceded by the creation of large sailing ships and harbor infrastructure for different times. Naval cannon for pak96:


In render:


I get it with Maya + Toon Shader and with Photoshop painting, where I make final image. But I worry about of the border lines -  it enough to their thickness??




« Last Edit: January 27, 2012, 12:06:05 AM by sonik »

Offline sdog

Re: My first added
« Reply #4 on: January 27, 2012, 06:21:35 AM »
the guns look extremely large, compared to other objects in the pak.
Are the guns planed as part of an attraction, eg an old fortress?

Offline sdog

Re: My first added
« Reply #5 on: January 28, 2012, 08:01:40 AM »
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Yes, I understand that. Sorry, but I just wanted to understand the principle.
my reply wasn't meant as criticism (i'm not a painter myself), more as a question.

Offline sdog

Re: My first added
« Reply #6 on: January 29, 2012, 02:08:20 AM »
cool sloop, you got the billowing of the sail quite right, in particular as this is comic style!

Offline sonik

Re: My first added
« Reply #7 on: January 30, 2012, 12:52:14 AM »
Thank you for your feedback. The size of naval guns - yes, it's very large. The model will be used in future for the entourage of port structures in my addon "XVII-XVIII Ages". There size will comply with standards of pak96.

I moved my posts to the addon topic. I'll work on it, because it seems that the result is satisfied.

Offline reytm2

Re: My first added
« Reply #8 on: January 30, 2012, 10:47:08 PM »
I do not like to criticize, i apologize for that, but ... regardless of medieval weapons, are large, and i think the size is exaggerated. In fact, they have the same size of a house multi-family ...

Clear, never the first delivery is 100% good. and this is pleasing to the eye

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Offline sonik

Re: My first added
« Reply #9 on: January 30, 2012, 10:57:21 PM »
All right. This is just an attempt to convert the model into a format the game. I showed you the results of such a large amount to learn - whether it is possible to use these renderings for the pak96.comic style. Now, I already knew how to work with this style - thanks to you. And once again - the scale is exaggerated on purpose. While I don't have models of buildings near at hand, sorry. I showed that I had.

Offline reytm2

Re: My first added
« Reply #10 on: January 30, 2012, 11:28:26 PM »
Don't want you to be discouraged ... i am interested in that each day will increase more cartoonists of the pak ... your work is good and that is very helpful ...

This link shows a house multi-family to scale ... you can take it as a reference.

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