UPDATE: There's now a first draft of my work attached later in this thread, if you're interested in checking it out.
First of all I want to say I absolutely love this Pak and play with it almost exclusively, the design and feel is excellent and is unique among the major paks available for this great game, so thanks to everyone who works on it!
Because I like the Comic Pak and Simutrans so much I want to address the fact that as a native English speaker I can't help but notice that the English translation could use some major work in cleaning up unusual/incorrect word order and capitalization. I'd be glad to go through the translation and make it more cleaner and native to English if it was something nobody else had planned to do.
I thought I'd ask if this was an acceptable thing to do before embarking on it, to make sure I wasn't intruding on anyone else's work or if for some reason it would be frowned upon...thanks.
(Yes this is my first post, I made an account because I wanted to do this so much