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Offline danivenk

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GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« on: March 21, 2013, 07:31:37 PM »
This is an Citea Bus Class SLF-120
In Simutrans

Real


Here are the .pak, .dat and the .png-file

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Re: GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« Reply #1 on: March 21, 2013, 07:42:22 PM »
Hello Danivenk
Your bus look very good out. :thumbsup:

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Re: GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2013, 07:42:45 PM »
Sorry, forgotten to add the .dat-file
here it is  ;)

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Re: GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2013, 08:04:56 PM »
Here I'm again, but here it the final one
(The blue wasn't all player color)

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Re: GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« Reply #4 on: March 21, 2013, 10:01:14 PM »
I think you can still improve your graphics with smoother lines and using different light levels of player color. (see example in attached file)

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Re: GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« Reply #5 on: March 22, 2013, 02:51:41 PM »
@gauthier;
do you mean like this?

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Re: GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« Reply #6 on: March 22, 2013, 05:59:22 PM »
That's better, anyway be careful with light levels : southern face is lighter. 2nd, 5th and 6th views aren't well lit. Diagonal views don't look consistent too : parts facing the player are lighter on vertical views than on horizontal ones.

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Re: GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« Reply #7 on: March 25, 2013, 03:47:52 PM »
here is an another update on my bus.
If you see something that has to be improve, please say it.  ;)

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Re: GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« Reply #8 on: March 26, 2013, 11:10:26 PM »
The front still looks too raked. The rear looks good though.

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Re: GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« Reply #9 on: March 27, 2013, 09:25:05 AM »
The front still looks too raked.
How do you mean?

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Re: GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« Reply #10 on: March 27, 2013, 02:33:32 PM »
I'm okay with this update, it's a nice one, congrats  ;D

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Re: GVB Bus Citea Klasse SLF-120
« Reply #11 on: March 29, 2013, 01:25:38 AM »
How do you mean?
The front should be more up-right.